One moment you swallowed instead of speaking. Write what you wanted to say.
What did you want to say when you were angry but stayed quiet?
Everyone gets the same subject. What differs is the follow-up: one question for children, two for teens, three for adults. Only the children's wording is simplified.
Pick one. A single idea taken all the way beats ten touched lightly.
Cut every “well, but”. The sentence stands up straight without them.
Cut at the conjunction. Where “and” or “so” appears, a period belongs.
Write the visible, not the felt, and the reader stands there with you.
Open with a question and the reader keeps going to find the answer.
One line against your own view makes the whole piece stronger.