Something you keep failing to fix. Write exactly where it breaks.
What do you try daily but can't do, and why?
Everyone gets the same subject. What differs is the follow-up: one question for children, two for teens, three for adults. Only the children's wording is simplified.
Pick one. A single idea taken all the way beats ten touched lightly.
Cut every “well, but”. The sentence stands up straight without them.
Cut at the conjunction. Where “and” or “so” appears, a period belongs.
One long sentence can sink the whole piece.
If it still flows without them, the flow was already there.
'Thing' hides the real word. Name it.