Something that was huge the first time. Write it from your height then.
What looked really big the first time you saw it?
Everyone gets the same subject. What differs is the follow-up: one question for children, two for teens, three for adults. Only the children's wording is simplified.
Pick one. A single idea taken all the way beats ten touched lightly.
Cut every “well, but”. The sentence stands up straight without them.
Cut at the conjunction. Where “and” or “so” appears, a period belongs.
Instead of 'I was sad', write what your body did.
Write the visible, not the felt, and the reader stands there with you.
Open with a question and the reader keeps going to find the answer.