Start from the moment you kept thinking about what you didn't choose.
Was something hard to choose? What was it?
Everyone gets the same subject. What differs is the follow-up: one question for children, two for teens, three for adults. Only the children's wording is simplified.
Pick one. A single idea taken all the way beats ten touched lightly.
Cut every “well, but”. The sentence stands up straight without them.
Cut at the conjunction. Where “and” or “so” appears, a period belongs.
The last line is the one that stays.
One long sentence can sink the whole piece.
If it still flows without them, the flow was already there.