Something 'sorry' didn't fix. What was actually needed?
How did you feel when someone said sorry?
Everyone gets the same subject. What differs is the follow-up: one question for children, two for teens, three for adults. Only the children's wording is simplified.
Explaining is what stalls you. Put down what you saw and what you heard instead.
Find the sentence you are least sure about. What you actually meant is usually hiding there.
Skip it and start at the second. The opening writes itself once the rest exists.
Lose them in line one and the rest never happens.
The same ending three times in a row puts readers to sleep.
These words look like force. They take it away.