Which is sharper — the day you photographed or the one you didn't?
What day do you remember well with no photos?
Everyone gets the same subject. What differs is the follow-up: one question for children, two for teens, three for adults. Only the children's wording is simplified.
Skip it and start at the second. The opening writes itself once the rest exists.
Delete every line anyone could have written. What is left is yours.
Pick one. A single idea taken all the way beats ten touched lightly.
These words look like force. They take it away.
Stopping early is the hardest and the most readable.
One word that needs a dictionary is where reading stops.