A day you met scripted kindness and the real thing.
A day someone was kind to you.
Everyone gets the same subject. What differs is the follow-up: one question for children, two for teens, three for adults. Only the children's wording is simplified.
Pick one. A single idea taken all the way beats ten touched lightly.
Cut every “well, but”. The sentence stands up straight without them.
Cut at the conjunction. Where “and” or “so” appears, a period belongs.
'Last Tuesday' always beats 'sometimes'.
Say the conclusion first and the rest sorts itself out.
Give a reason once and a claim turns into thinking.